Story 1, Episode 2

This is an installment of a story. Each week we will write a new piece of a story, and invite you to use your comments to help choose what happens next, or just add description to whatever is already going on. Assuming it works at all, sometimes we will have an arc in mind, sometimes we will toss dice, sometimes we will be at your whim.

The stench became unbearable as a thick smog enveloped the forest.
Alyx vomited and retched while crying, finding it hard to breathe.
The canopy resembled a black ceiling under the new moon.
An imposing vagueness commands reverence.

a. Alyx stands tall
b. Alyx bows down
c. Alyx welcomes death with open arms
d. Polemos is the father of all things

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Or will she be reincarnated as another forest spirit for another story?

Anyway, I think she can survive a little bit of smog and sickness. Keep on truckin'

we all die sooner or later, a single lifetime can be enough to tell many stories. maybe alyx dies now but we get a flashback sequence to how they got here. or maybe alyx is not the main character in this story. maybe it's a murder mystery and someone else tries to solve the mystery of how alyx died

d!

It's gotta be that one.

But anyways where didja took that Polemos thing from? Someone doing classical studies? lol if so.

Of course inhabitoid brainlets choose to bow down.

We anarchs choose C.

Are the anarchs with you right now, 19:03? Are they telling you to do bad things?

Stop this cringe writing exercise at once and return to cringe topics of the week. Both talent and skill are lacking. It's as if the author of Evasion has head trauma and it trying to relearn how to write a paragraph a week while nodding off from an oxy habit. It's as if Beavis and Butthead had a retarded child and are forcing them to write a paragraph a week or go without food. Alyx will bring about the death of anews. Kill Alyx before ze kills anews.

if this series displeases you so much, i hope anews keeps it up until you stop visiting this site, troll

On the contrary, I am quite pleased. My comment is working to unite you.

The vaseline became unbearable as a thick marijuana and rectal fluid enveloped the forest.
Alyx sucked it all up while crying out Viva le Anarch
The cave resembled a WalMart ceiling under the new moon.
"Where the hell can we get a burger around here?"

a strong gust if wind followed by a heavy rain quickly gets rid of whatever that smoke is. alyx remembers they have wings and they fly away from the scene

The spooks all converged upon the empty shell of Alyx's and consumed it voraciously, and then gazed upwards and noted the direction in which Alyx's metamorphosized new winged identity had flown, and went into pursuit.
The trail of candy wrappers, prophalactics, vaseline containers and rectal fluid was easy to follow, and soon they came across Alyx, her wings shredded from a hail storm she had flown through. Yup, nature don't give a fuck about spook-magnets!

There's more than one brow on anews, brow. With you that makes at least three which is likely a record. Thecollective must be so proud.

Don't forget the browettes, unless you're a gender nihilist dude!

...are like two brows opposing each other yet being so much alike, and on the same visaaaage of anarchy planet!

So romantic.

So you're not good abstracting?

A & C

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