Submitted by Errsian (not verified) on Thu, 06/25/2020 - 18:06
I feel like a haiku-nazi for pointing this out, but the 2nd line in haiku should have 7 syllables, and in the october 1 and 2, you had 6 and 8 syllables, and I discontinued from reading further fearing that, my own diligense and perfection to the codes of haiku writing would be perverted by further contact with this novices attempts,,,. *blushes* .
I cannot go on,
My verbal wall is closed now,
Sorry I'm an ass.
I feel like a haiku-nazi for pointing this out, but the 2nd line in haiku should have 7 syllables, and in the october 1 and 2, you had 6 and 8 syllables, and I discontinued from reading further fearing that, my own diligense and perfection to the codes of haiku writing would be perverted by further contact with this novices attempts,,,. *blushes* .
I cannot go on,
My verbal wall is closed now,
Sorry I'm an ass.