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So the desired effect of your main event is to bore readers away and back to the real world, I guess this is unraveling in the right direction. While I may sound spurious saying that, it's possible this might be part of your unstated goal.

But I see no reason for being "sensitive to the genre". I only presume the implied meaning here is that you need to write in a proper genre so to reach your target readership... So what are they? Those well-known impressionable academics who only kept giving anarchy a really bad name for their boners on BIG words and 500 pages essay base-line requirements for arguments? Feeding that crowd is not needed. They can disappear from history and no one will even notice, as they end up working at the Wendy's or Amazon under the collapsing academic system.