At a first glance, your texts don’t pop out or come right through with their intended message.
There is not a first sentence (or catchy title) that grabs you and tells you outright the main message that will be communicated or discussed.
You could try, not as a rule, but as a writing exercise, to summarize the main idea of each of your posts into a first sentence, which is restated as the last sentence, and can also be shortened as catchy title.
This isn’t a requirement, and you may write as feel like; just giving you my particular feedback.
At a first glance, your texts don’t pop out or come right through with their intended message.
There is not a first sentence (or catchy title) that grabs you and tells you outright the main message that will be communicated or discussed.
You could try, not as a rule, but as a writing exercise, to summarize the main idea of each of your posts into a first sentence, which is restated as the last sentence, and can also be shortened as catchy title.
This isn’t a requirement, and you may write as feel like; just giving you my particular feedback.