A Few Anarcho-Pacifst Texts That I Wrote

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A Few Anarcho-Pacifst Texts That I Wrote

These could have been written better, but, I think that they turned out alright. I have a few more that really round out the theory, but, I'm waiting to see if one of them will get published and so just have these for now. Here they are: https://alistairlane.tumblr.com/

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At a first glance, your texts

At a first glance, your texts don’t pop out or come right through with their intended message.

There is not a first sentence (or catchy title) that grabs you and tells you outright the main message that will be communicated or discussed.

You could try, not as a rule, but as a writing exercise, to summarize the main idea of each of your posts into a first sentence, which is restated as the last sentence, and can also be shortened as catchy title.

This isn’t a requirement, and you may write as feel like; just giving you my particular feedback.

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Some of them are a little bit

Some of them are a little bit boring. I wonder if I'm just sort of boring. I do try to introduce the concept in the opening and restate a sumarry of my theories as it closes. I sort of just trail off with the theory at times. A few of them just sort of end. I think that the titles are alright. Titling the first text, "Anarcho-Pacifism", isn't really descriptive enough. Mabye I'm just too agreeable? I don't think that I'm not much of a polemicist. I thought that I'd have a much easier time writing political theory since I read so much of it. I liken this to a lack of engagement with my stated political position which is Anarcho-Pacifism. There aren't really a lot of Anarcho-Pacifist texts out there, though.

Thanks for the response. I'm kind of suprised that one came up so quickly as this forum doesn't seem to move too quickly.

anon (not verified)
It’s great you have your work

It’s great you have your work there and putting it out there, you’ll get better fast! You have your whole life to work on it, and you can go as fast or take your time as you’d like. What’s important at this stage is that at least your ideas are clear to you, then you can focus on how to best make yourself understood by your intended readership.

anon (not verified)
I do appreciate you

I do appreciate you encouraging my writing, but, I'm probably not as young as you think I am. Most people assume that Anarcho-Pacifists are young. I was an Anarcho-Pacifist as a teenager and then I got into Communization and Autonomism and I've just recently come back to it. I've always vaguely agreed with some sort of ethic of nonviolence, but, haven't decided to call myself an Anarcho-Pacifist until just recently.

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I'll post these again later

I'll post these again later whenever I have all of them up. It'll be like in a month or so.

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